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Ariel's Madness

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ARIEL'S MADNESS

The Ariel we all know is a sweet,caring and curious mermaid.She can have everything she wants as long as king Triton doesn't have any knowledge about it.She has seen a human by a sinking shipwreck and saw Prince Eric.She wants him.And now Ursula,the sea witch,wants to help Ariel to get the man of her dreams so she made a deal with her that she can get feet and legs to see her prince,but in exchange for her voice.When Ursula took her voice,Ariel immediately swam up to the shore with friends Flounder and Sebastian.But Ursula wants her prince Eric too,so she disguises as a human and used Ariel's voice to cast a spell on prince Eric to be in love with her.

Ariel was so sad so she came back to swim into Ursula's place with a help of her friends,Flounder and Sebastian.She learn Ursula's magic and she can have her feet again.But she became so obsessed with prince Eric up to the point she steals every mermaids' voices,giving them feet and let them drown in the ocean or get eaten by sharks.Ursula came back with her prince.But as soon as Ariel saw her,she charges at her and sapped out all her powers and turned her into dust.When she disappeared,she took back her own voice,and also,her possession.

--THE 'HORRIBLE' END--

Hello XD Please give me good comments,critiques,ways to improve and comments regarding the story  XD

It's my first time to join so please be nice ☺️

NO CURSES,NO BAD WORDS,JUST GOOD COMMENTS.

HOW DID I COME UP WITH THE IDEA?

Firstly,I searched the web.What for? To look for something that can have the same drawing as mine.I checked if there is no other drawing that I can come up with.I took a lot of sketches of her and decided to make into my style,make her have Ursula's tentacles as she is insane in the story.I thought 'Ariel is too good.I want to make her bad.' And why not Cinderella or Snow White? Because they're my favorite xD I can't think of some twist in the story except for this one xD 

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weegee06's avatar

Oh no! A twist ending! Great art!